I went on an early cycle round the Greenway yesterday, with the field margins and hedgerows full of movement and vigour, wildflowers, birds and fruit, whilst the field itself seemed stilled and characterless, until a skylark gave it life. This is the prose-poem I wrote when I returned…
Silver lifting, undersides of leaves blown back in the dancing hedgerows, flashes of sloe gin, damson jelly and hazelnut brittle. This foragers’ fringe, ablaze with ripening abundance and the verge beneath, a study in vetch and clover, irregularly spiked with pink sainfoin beacons. Finches thrill above me, flocking, dipping, two-dimensional as they turn, absorbed by the air then wheeling, blackening the sky with their profiled presence.
Within all this elasticity, this marginal vigour, an absence: the ploughed void. September movement stilled, the colours muted, diversity subdued, until my eye adjusts to a sharper focus. Then a skylark twitches and, for a moment, dun uniformity is replaced with form and colour. Tawny feathers shake against the fissured landscape and the lark assumes its customary stillness, its pebbled mantle absorbed again by the ploughed earth.
4 thoughts on “Still Life”
Lovely descriptive writing, enjoyed the picture you painted! I l get pleasure from watching & hearing finches too.
Thank you. It was a lovely quiet scene and the wildlife took centre stage. Glad you enjoyed reading 😊
How relaxing that must have been – a wonderful description, I can almost taste the sloe gin!
Thank you. It was a lovely morning. I’ve got plum gin soaking in the cupboard and next week I plan to do the same cycle but with a plastic bag in my pannier. I have the gin already waiting for the sloes! 😋